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If I wanna survive on Haiguinet -- 阿修罗 - (633 Byte) 2007-9-21 周五, 02:40 (2471 reads) |
Diamondhorse
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作者：Diamondhorse 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
try to write more carefully.
Some of the underlined sentences have room for improvement.
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Don't hate me , because I am smart and beautiful!
Last week, I had an impeccable interview with an engagement manager for requiring to participate the project with General Electrical in P.R.China.
During the our conversation, I demonstrated that throughout academic and professional career, I had adhered to the highest standards of excellence and have demonstrated successful team leadership, strong communication skills, analytical ability, creativity, and dedication. In addition, my Chinese heritage, background, and experience would be a valuable asset for this offshoring project in China. Through the interview, he "WOW" three times about my credentials and insights.....
The outcome is what? He turned my application down. I was astonished and even the colleagues . I recalled all Q&A to my gurus and them draw a same conclusion : He definitely felt intimidated and he was green with envy. For him, you aren't harmless anymore.
Gosh! Suddenly I have a mixed feeling. As a consultant, you must be confident and competent. Otherwise you can't deal with these C-suit persons. In front of this similar age Caucasian guy, I shined myself and thought he would pick up the best of best candidates. The truth wakes me up: he picked the mediocre and "harmless" candidates. The experience definitely teach me something I haven't figure it out yet. Something isn't sunny.
What I want to say is " Don't hate me , because I am smart and beautiful!"
作者：阿修罗 在 海归主坛 发贴, 来自【海归网】 https://www.haiguinet.com
Writing:
I have always had a subsc<x>ription of magazines such as Fortune , Forbes, Time, and the Business Week. Read 1 hr a day or however much time you have to spare. Keep a dictionary handy. When you see a new word, look it up and circle it in the magazine or newspaper. So at the end of reading session, go back and review your new words. Don’t try to go for quantity. Comb through the passage. When reading, I tried to analyze sentence structures. After finishing reading a sentence, I asked myself to re-construct it and compared what I did with the original.
Verb tense and personal pronouns are used too loosely here. Try to be consistent.
I received my training in writing mainly through technical writing and business writing courses. Edit your work first. Then ask somebody who you think is a good writer to critique your work.
Speaking:
Accent training, I hired a phonetic expert as my tutor and
listen radio can develop an ear to pick the new vocabulary with right pronunciation. I also give the public speech to different audiences periodically and I record my speech and rewind to figure my soft spots.
Meanwhile, as a project leader, I have to communicate assistants, collaborator and supervisors in English consistently and concisely.
My friends are all over the world, when we hook up we have to speak in English. They teach me slangs and colloquials.
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This is in no way trying to discourage you. Keep on practising. I noticed that IIFAN pointed out some of your grammatical mistakes already. He is pretty good and you should learn from him.
作者：Diamondhorse 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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