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作者：TangTangTang 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
Pictures 4 and 5 are better. 4 has the rustic wooden spools, and 5 has a good sense of balance with the double half rainbows countered by the bunch of flowers. 1 could've been very foreboding but the framing is a bit cluttered. In general colors are muted after the rain, so you might want to change your color profile to vivid if you want to keep in color. You may also try converting to black and white with increased contrast, should look more dramatic and iconic. With your particular light, I may also try a split ND to make the sky even darker for some of the shots. Tough to tell if it'll work though.
No EXIF so can't tell what lens you used, but from the looks of it, your widest end is probably a 17mm, or around 24mm on a cropped body. I'd go even wider if you have the lens. unless your lens is very wide, landscape layout is generally too plain to work, Ansel Adams uses a lot of portrait layout and I find portrait to be more versatile.
Two more purely technical nick picks, the horizons are too close to the center, and you have a couple very large specks of dust on your sensor.
作者：TangTangTang 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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 [原创贴图]摄影习作-又见彩虹  -- 笨猪塔克 - (1517 Byte) 2008-6-29 周日, 08:06 (2190 reads) - Foreground needs a bit more drama -- TangTangTang - (1104 Byte) 2008-6-30 周一, 04:37 (521 reads)
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